BP #5-Summary and Analysis of an Article: Bruins Lose to Flames in Shootout
On Friday morning, the Boston Herald released an article summary of the Bruins game verses Calgary Flames that was played the night before. Author Steve Conroy, expressed his view on the hard fought loss for the B's. He quoted head coach, Claude Julien, many times. On Julien's thoughts of shootouts to determine the outcome of a game and his thought of how well his team played. Conroy also spoke of the white-knuckled shootout. Both teams missed the first six shots of the shootout. Then on the seventh, "...Patrice Bergeron put the B’s in the driver’s seat with the first goal of the shootout.." Right after that, "..the Flames got goals from Josh Jooris and waiver wire pick-up David Schlemko, sandwiched around a Milan Lucic miss, and the B’s had to settle for one point." The game was overall a hard fought win and the Boston Bruins will be playing tomorrow night at the TD Garden against the Philadelphia Flyers. They look to improve the imperfections and pull off a win for the night to set their record for the season at 32-22-10.
Very detailed summary
ReplyDeleteMolly, you shouldn't put ellipsis (...) before you insert quotes. You only use ellipsis when you are cutting out parts of the middle of the quote ("When you quote but don't need the words in the middle...you punctuate the quote like this.")
ReplyDeleteAlso, the newswriting article was BP#5--so there might be some discrepancies but not a problem. Just resume numbering according to how they are numbered on my blog.